7. Using your notes from exercise 6, write a paragraph plan for your essay. Use the essay in exercise 3 as a model and follow the advice in the Writing Strategy.
(Sử dụng ghi chú của bạn từ bài tập 6, viết một kế hoạch đoạn văn cho bài luận của bạn. Sử dụng bài luận trong bài tập 3 làm mẫu và làm theo lời khuyên trong Chiến lược viết)
Bài Làm:
Introduction:
- General statement: School is not just about academic subjects, but also about physical fitness and personal development.
- Briefly mention the topic of the essay: the idea that doing sports at school is a distraction from more important work.
- Thesis statement: I believe that sports are an integral part of education and should be encouraged alongside academic subjects.
Body paragraph 1:
- Topic sentence: Sports have many benefits beyond physical fitness.
- Supporting evidence: Research shows that sports can improve mental health, teamwork, and leadership skills.
- Explanation: By participating in sports, students learn important life skills that can help them in their personal and professional lives.
Body paragraph 2:
- Topic sentence: Academic subjects are not more important than sports.
- Supporting evidence: All subjects have value in education and should be given equal importance.
- Explanation: By prioritizing academic subjects over sports, we risk neglecting the holistic development of students and limiting their potential for success.
Body paragraph 3:
- Topic sentence: Ways to add more sports to the school timetable without affecting other subjects.
- Supporting evidence: Incorporating physical activities during class breaks, offering after-school sports programs, and rotating schedules for physical education periods.
- Explanation: These options provide opportunities for students to participate in sports without disrupting their academic schedules, allowing for a balanced and healthy educational experience.
Conclusion:
- Restate thesis statement: Sports are an important part of education that should be encouraged alongside academic subjects.
- Recap supporting points from body paragraphs.
- Final thoughts: Encouraging sports at school not only promotes physical fitness but also fosters personal growth and development.